Anyone willing to give some feedback on lyrics?

-Untitled-
Jet stream at my face
Cars racing by at my feet
I wanna take the step
And feel the updraft
As I fall to my defeat

I’m tired, so fucking tired of losing what I could have had
Always feeling this monotonous knot in my chest
Restless nights and burned out days
Why won’t someone just kill me?

Pushed in front of a truck
Held underwater until I cant breath
Anywhere’s better than here

-Positive Selfishness-
Trapped under unanswered questions
Indecisive values and goals
An endless search for what I want in life
Never sure on what my future holds

Doubtful and insecure mentally
Leads to a mountain of passed opportunities
Praying and waiting in hope of a sign
Only to find a scene of myself watching time tick by

And again I’m left with these unanswered questions
When I know that nothing will change
Unless I change myself for myself
With the only question being
“What’s’ the best for me”

-Warped World-
Dark purple clouds outlined in red
Fill my world with the familiar end
The night now falling
Like it always I did
Atmospheric pressures rise
My eyes begin to sweat again

Will there ever be a change in here
This world I’ve made inside my mind
Dissipates the love and joy out of real life
The outside world spent with friends
Is always affected by the never ending battle inside my head

Breaking free is easier said than done
When I lack the faith provided free from above

Time to open my mind to wide open view
Its time to see my world with an unclouded color hue

-DeJa Vu-
A reason? I’m unsure
I’ve yet to find an answer
To the recurring name of a person
I’ve just begun to build tithe with

From persisting thoughts within myself
To the street signs that pass
The name that may be in my future
Breaks my train of thought everywhere I glance

My emotions are blurred by introspection
Half filled with hope, half with aggravation
A wall I’ve built for so many years
Is now being torn down
By what was once my biggest fear?

Love and commitment for another person
Was once impossible
How could I have loved someone else?
When I didn’t even love myself

I’m giving me a second chance
A brand new world
Blueprinted by thought
Engineered from the heart

I plan to this life forever
A world where I can love another

 

okay...

 

I want your lyrics lol They are pretty good, They can be used in many different genres. One tip... Spell Check ...
Other then that i would say 9/10 for all fo them =]

 

pretty good stuff there mate keep it up

 

this is really deep :O

 

Wow, that was pretty good. Nice use of diction

 

i think you really dug deep down inside to right this. i really like it. keep it up

 

I think it is a bit too rude. The lyrics contain rude language and I think you should change those parts to more decent words