First typography.

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First typography.
  1. Unread #1 - Aug 25, 2009 at 5:47 AM
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    First typography.

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  3. Unread #2 - Aug 25, 2009 at 10:22 AM
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    First typography.

    Awesome until the end bit. I don't like the diagonal part for some reason, I think it would have looked better if you kept it all horizontal/vertical. I do see why you did this because of the slanted part of the W. Try and find a way around this if you can.

    Otherwise I have no other criticism. I've never done a typography piece soz lolol.

    Idea: Why not reverse the 'HOW' so it's like the H is at the bottom and the W is at the top. You could still read it. It would make it so you could change the diagonal text to horizontal.

    Idfk just an idea u dont hav 2 use it
     
  5. Unread #3 - Aug 25, 2009 at 1:13 PM
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    First typography.

    I'll spell HOW with an E not a W.

    Plan works?
     
  7. Unread #4 - Aug 25, 2009 at 3:15 PM
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    First typography.

    Looks real nice and clean, my only advice is to do something with the background.
    Also, the lower part of the typography needs some work as stated earlier.
     
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