Hmm Dont Do Many Of These...

I rarely do large work but i was working on some for JuicedNet (my current project) for my portfolio so idk tell me what you guys think

Thanks,
Chamil

 

The top and bottom framing should be taken from the yellow/purple areas and shouldn't include text.
Blend the top of the rainbow.
Also the light source is what?

Solid design.

 

Oh yeah 5got the lighting source ohhpsy idk like i said dont do many of these.

 

The space stock under that smudge thing doesn't match whatsoever. It's a huge distraction from the focal unless you color it with gradient maps or something.

 

Its really not meant to be anything i just was havin some fun with it messin around idk thanks for all the CnC so far i suppose

 

I've seen a fair few of your posts and I didn't have the impression of you being one of those kind of people...

The people who will post something and after everyone has given some good CnC you would say: "Oh, I'm not that bothered about CnC, I just was messing around."

Why post it then?

It's really annoying, so don't do this again because I think you've got some potential at GFX. I'm not yelling at you or anything, just trying to give you some tips.

 

^ Funnily enough that's about the only mature squidge you'll ever see.

I don't like the pixalated bend, or the huge smudge, but otherwise concept and execution is pretty nice.

 

stfu ilu

Border is just gay chamil. remove pls.

 

In his earlier days he was more mature if I remember correctly

 

That was deep. Nice one squidge.

 

Lol alright guys i do take the CnC to heart but i just dont feel like actually messing with this piece anymore lol not a fan of large art work. But thanks for all the comments my peeps.

 

hot as

 

Looks really cool the only thing I don't like is the specs around the cotton candy looking puff.