TDD's English Story from last year

TDD · Aug 20, 2009

This story never got graded, the teachers refused to because it was "too graphic" which is bullshit imo, but anywho, Daily said I should post it:

(NOTE: It is not as graphic as this is about 2 version prior to the final version which was epic in-depth with the rape and mutilation )

Connubial Aceldama

The familiar ring of an alarm clock slowly brought Joe to an awake state. Caring not for the common occurence, Joe simple lay there, staring at the rocky chalk ceiling in complete bliss. A smile spread across his face, as his anticipation for the day grew. This gave him plenty of drive to proceed out of his large, comfortable bed. His tall body, dark hair, and strong physical features crept to the cold morning floor. With outstretched arms he cast off the sleep and looked at the clock. "Just an hour untill work, I had best be getting ready." Joe made his way to his average suburban kitchen, containing the average appliances which included the common coffee pot. He proceeded to brew a hot cup of coffee. Life many mornings before, he proceeded to his garage with a newspaper under his arm and a cup of coffee in his hand.

The distinct smell of burned flesh and blood filled his lungs as he opened the door. Stopping for a second, he turned on the light switch and proceeded inwards. Joe looked around in satisfaction, his garage always made him happy. The blood stained walls and remnants of uman flesh reminded him of happier times. The smell of burned flesh brought to light the girl at the far corner of the garage, one leg missing, chunks of hair gone, gagged yet still alive. Joe looked at the girl with a familiar glint in his eye and tilted his head back in a curious glance. His mind raced with memories, looking at the girl covered in burn marks, reminding him of his late wife, oh how he loved his wife. She was his first love, first wife, first murder. He hadn't the privilege of taking the time to enjoy himself with her as he had done with the many others, she was a quick flame to extinguish, her and the man she had so willingly gone to bed with.

Joe shrugged the memories off, took a sip of his coffee, walked over in front of the body, and opened the newspaper. "Good morning Elisa, how was your night?", Elisa squirmed on the floor in fear and mumbled through her gag. "Ah, I thought as much." Joe said shaking his head, "You know, we can never have a meaningful relationship if you never talk to me!" he laughed, and took another sip of coffee. Joe sat his cup down and turned to Elisa, knelt down on one knee, and placing his hand on her cheek he exclaimed "You know I love you, you're so precious, but I have to go to work now. So you be a good girl and I promise i'll make up for my absence when I return." He removed her gag and shoved his tongue into her mouth. Elisa struggled and attempted to bite his tongue, but he had wedged her jaw open with his thumb and forefinger in a pre-emptive measure.

Joe withdrew himself, replaced the gag and smiled. "Have a great day." He then turned, grabbed his coffee and walked out of the garage, locking it and turning the light off behind him. On his way to work, Joe eyed several potential playmates, but none quite satisfied his needs. There was one individual constantly on his mind. His boss' secretary, Joanne, had quite the body, and she did resemble his wife uncannily. He enjoyed the thought, but knew he couldn't cheat on Elisa just yet. He figured she wouldn't last too much longer anyway, also knowing she planned on leaving him soon. He settled on the idea of making a move on Joanne.

That afternoon he noticed Joanne in the parking lot, and approached her. "Hey Joanne, wait up!" He yelled. "Oh, hi Joe," she smiled excitedly, "what's up?"

"I was wondering if you were doing anything tonight?" Joe rubbed his neck in slight embarrassment.

She smiled even wider, "Nothing at all!"

"Would you like to come by my place at around nine and have a late dinner with me?" Joe looked dead at Joanne in anticipation.

"Sure! I'd love to! What's your address again?" Joe wrote down his street address on a scrap of paper and handed it to Joanne. After a brief wave the two parted ways and left the parking garage.

Joe knew he had to work fast. Once home he threw his tie and clothes off and put on just a robe. He grabbed his tool box from under his bed and headed into the garage. Elisa lay asleep on the concrete floor, exhausted after obviously attempting to free herself. Joe quietly sat his tool box down, opened the box and pulled out his essentials. On the table lay a soldering iron, a sharpened butcher's knife, a flew pliers and a hammer. Joe removed his robe and lay it on the table.

"Elisa," Joew said as he rammed his heel into her shoulder, "wake up, I have a surprise for you!" Elisa shot straight awake, and began to squirm in fear. "Relax, relax," Joe said calmly, "I'm going to let you go!" Elisa's eyes welled up, and she began to cry in ecstasy. "Yes, yes, but first we're going to play a game. The rules are simple, and you have to do it, or else I will not free you." Elisa nodded her head in anticipation. "Good," said Joe, "then here's the deal..."

The doorbell rang as Joe finished up cooking his bacon cabonara. He had cleaned himself up, and wore a very nice suit. He rushed to the door, and flung it open to greet Joanne. "Welcome, please come in!" Joanne smiled at Joe and stepped into the house. "Dinner is on the table, you must be starved?" Joe escorted Joanne to the garage door, opened it and shoved her inside. Within the garage Elisa was left to roam, and she promptly attacked Joanne as instructed.

After subduing Joanne, Joe tied her up and turned to Elisa. "Good job, you're free to go." As Elisa had passed Joe, he turned and hit her in the back of the neck, instantly knocking her to the cold concrete floor. He began to violently rape her, forcing himself into her while she lay crying, unable to speak as she choked on her own cries as Joanne had no choice but to watch.

Joe looked at Joanne, and instantly climaxed. He withdrew and placed Elisa on his work bench, grabbing his tools. He turned the soldering iron on and began hacking off Elisa's only remaining leg, while burning the arteries closed with the soldering iron, he wanted Elisa to live, he hadn't finished with her just yet. Joanne tried to muster a scream as Joe threw Elisa's remaining leg to the ground by Joanne but no scream came.

Joe left the room and ate his now-cold dinner, and upon returning he pulled Elisa close and pushed his penis inside her blood-covered vagina, Elisa tried to struggle but was too weak to do anything. Joe thrusted in and out all the while laughing, and smashing Elisa's head into the wall. Blood was now pouring down the wall as Elisa's lifeless body continued to be thrusted into by Joe. After Joe had once again climaxed, he reached for his hammer and began violently beating into Elisa's body with it. After finishing with Elisa's corpse, he reached for his tools and headed towards Joanne...
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tl;dr; = Guy cuts girl's legs off, keeps her alive, rapes her in front of this other girl he kidnapped. serial killer, etc.

The True Gears · Aug 20, 2009

Who wouldve known that TDD was secretly a rapist.

FreedomFight · Aug 20, 2009

Never even mentioned if the girls were hot. Tisk.

TDD · Aug 20, 2009

FreedomFight said: ↑

Never even mentioned if the girls were hot. Tisk.
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that's a given, who'd rape an ugly chick?

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