Pete Wentz Signature (CnC please) (Version three being made)

Subject inspired by KIABIN + FOB generally.

Text inspired by Unb4nn3d's signature, I'm guessing it's by Verts.

 

The text is a no no, lighting is ok, and you put a up a good focal point.
The random blobs in the left could make place for better effects. also the bar with tribal on it should be removed.

 

Thanks, I'll make a v2 for this evening.

 

I really love it man your improving alot! The colors are amazing not to mention the lighting just a overall amazing job.

 

I absolutely LOVE the left side effects, especially down on the left shoulder. The smudging is flawless, and the text is nice. Only sort of text I don't like is the scan lines, but still, It's a great sig.

Edit:

I also saw that there was an effect on the left cheek.

 

Lighting is not all that, just better than your usual. Text is bad. Blobs on left side are too concentrated in one area. Smudging behind his head and behind text suck hard. I use that bar effect a lot but not good in this situation.

-squidge

 

better/worse?

 

Worse, text was placed correctly in v1, just executed wrong.
Remove the big green bar.

 

Ohh okay, and i'll make v3 for this evening.

 

Now that I've gotten to thoroughly look it over, the text is actually somewhat nice. Only thing I'm concerned about is the effect on his left cheek.

 

I can't even see his left cheek.... oO

 

It's his right cheek, but from the signature point of view, it's his left.

 

it would look better if you saw more of him than just his head, now it just looks like a floating head .. and i also agree with haunted on removing the green bar

also, the right side of the sig is VERY plain, and v2 text is not good
v1 text was better .. but the contrast on v2 is better
take that contrast on v1

you know what you should do on the right side of the sig
have a line of skyline of high buildings and skyscrapers
just the line that follows the skyline .. not the entire skyline

and then you can incorporate the text into the skyline if possible

hope that made sense and helped you

 

Hm, i see what you're getting at, but to have one that looks better than blobs might create two focal points, or just not accentuate the head on the whole.

The rest of the stock is fucked up, that the reason i had to improvise

And thanks, still haven't got round to v3.

 

I remember when everyone did clipping mask dot text lol. I don't like the placement of the render or stock, whatever the hell it was.

 

I'd say you would be better off without the big text

 

I like the text alot.