Blind Man

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Blind Man
  1. Unread #1 - Aug 3, 2009 at 7:16 PM
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    Blind Man

    Theres a blind man, null witness, witless.
    Colour undescribable, seeks guidance from the cane and his canine freind.
    braile is his only hail mary, a dark world is scary.
    yet the null witness witless individual has 1 more talent over the world.
    The ability to listen.


    I made this out of
    Boredom.

    Feel free to comment though =/ thanks
     
  3. Unread #2 - Aug 3, 2009 at 7:45 PM
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    Blind Man

    Thanks for making a poem about me, its Ok
    lol
     
  5. Unread #3 - Aug 3, 2009 at 8:05 PM
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    Blind Man

    It's a really great start. Expand on it a little more, make it longer, and touch up some parts. I like it. Hope to see it when it's fully finished.
     
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    Blind Man

    The wind is invisible,
    it does not want to know;
    already it has come
    and is leaving again
    heave a sigh,
    the wind
    will not resolve this problem
    touch the frozen tree
    (the wind is careful as a locksmith)
    the wind has come and gone
    and he will come again like a blind man
    tapping his cane
    a blind man tapping his cane
    arriving to pick up his load
    of pollen or birds
    his bagful of whistles and scents
    (his catcalls)
    the blind man
    (his currency of leaves)
    and lock them up in a secret place
    where no one has ever heard
    or seen from
    the wind
    again.




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