Hip Hop/Lyrics Tutorial

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Hip Hop/Lyrics Tutorial
  1. Unread #1 - Mar 5, 2009 at 4:08 PM
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    Hip Hop/Lyrics Tutorial

    Many people think writing lyrics is "easy"
    but im pretty sure they dont know the detail
    in this tutorial i will teach you basic things you can do to make rhymes better and more structured

    Metas: Metaphors EX.
    Raping bars like a pedophile

    Showing everything like girls gone wild

    Metaphors are underlying messages, or comparisons (both could be qualified in hip hop as Metas)
    Metas are very crucial in a 16 bar+ piece as you need to show some skill, and most talented rappers can show this

    Multies: Multiple rhymes

    Instead of

    Cat/hat

    it would be

    White child/ Strike wild

    or

    Never go back/ Forever known past

    Multies are multiple rhymes in a sequence
    Try to keep multies above 3 sylables and under 6 sylables or they will not flow right

    Slant rhymes

    not every word has a PERFECT rhyme, so if it sounds like itll work, try it ;)
    slant rhymes can make or break your piece, so try to be careful

    Ex.
    telephone/Go home

    Bar length
    Try to keep bars above 10 syllables and under 17 syllables
    nuff said ;)

    Bar consistancy
    try to keep the messages the same and the length the same

    dont talk about killing babies and then rainbows

    and try to keep it

    ...........
    ..............
    .............
    ............
    ..........
    ............


    instead of

    ..................
    .........
    ................
    ..............
    .............................
    ......
    ...............

    Complexity: Dont be lame
    Words arn't defined by definitions in music
    they are defined by the way you install them
    its like this:
    Dont use words that a first grader would know to rhyme
    Try to use words that you had to spend time to learn and your proud to know them
    noone likes to hear the same stuff (and to be honest, it gets to the point where you can guess what the next rhyme is before you finish the bar)

    Prominant and secondary words: Learn!
    Prominant - Words that are important to rhyme
    Secondary - Words you can ignore in a rhyme
    Normally used in multies the thing about this is, it tells you that
    You dont even NEED to rhyme words like: of, and, or, is, to, it ect.
    Because they really dont matter...
    So if your going to rhyme:
    The man was sitting on a bench with a pad and pen
    Youd just rhyme pad/pen

    So itd be:
    The man was sitting on a bench with a pad and pen
    He decided to write lyrics of slutty wemon and sad men


    ~add more later and i will make it more pretty~
    have any questions? post here!
     
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    I didn't imagine that someone would make guide how to write a lyrics oO
    Good job on it, you could add some more information to it later tho, other than that its all good.
    7/10
     
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    yeah, normally i wouldnt because its pretty basic knowledge
    but people on here look like they could make it somewhere with a little bit of work

    ;)

    ill add more to it later, and make it prettier lol
    just kinda tired
     
  7. Unread #4 - Mar 14, 2009 at 11:20 PM
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    not bad might help others
     
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    the tutorial its self is ok and average but how come in the rap sections im sorry but ur lyrics wernt very good =/ but this make it seem u cud write alot better
     
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    Hip Hop/Lyrics Tutorial

    this wasnt to show AMAZING lines
    i did this tutorial quick so that i could see people here improve not to sound "Smart" or anything
     
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    cool,its kinda messed up but cool 7/10
     
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