My pures first runescape PvP video!

hey, this is my first f2p strength pure video... please watch it i've never made one before, and just try to tell me what I can do to make the next video better then this one, if you can please comment and rate 5 stars!​

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LApVQk7lBZc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LApVQk7lBZc
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LApVQk7lBZc

- Thanks,
LOFIMMAB​

 

Why was it permabanned?

And nice vid man some nice kills.

 

It was good for your first video, But here are my suggestions:
More Music in the video, try and make the music sync with the KO's
More effects, effects are cool.
I have Plenty of other suggestions so if you would like to know them add my MSN and we can talk, I'm a pro vid creator. ^_^

 

hey, I did have music to sync with the video, but it already got removed for copyright issues, so I had to pick this one... there's really no other good ones. and thank you both for your opinions, and I agree it does have some nice k0s.

 

Great video dude.
Overall I would give it 10/10

 

Great video, just needs better music and cooler effects. 8/10

 

Hate f2p vids :love: And rock music lol, out of interest why did you get permed?

 

Perm banned from botting yews for one night, I've appealed 3 times, but obviously jaGex are fuck tards, so yeah... this is my first video sorry for horrible editing, I had a good song, but it got removed do to copyright shit, so I hadda use this... and youtube has a shitty list of music to select from.

 

Nice video, nice kills, make me a vid some time ;p

 

Thanks for everyones ratings and opinions and shit.

 

Very nice

 

Nice video dude i am currently working on my pure.

 

Bump, Please more views, I really need them,. : (