Mystery. [CnC Needed]

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Mystery. [CnC Needed]
  1. Unread #1 - Jul 5, 2009 at 11:30 AM
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    Mystery. [CnC Needed]

    Basically, I tried to vary my usual "Smudge" style, and came up with this;

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    V2; (the TRIBAL in the bg was too obvious for my liking)
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    Which i need to improve, since, as usual, habits can kill skill.

    Please give decent comments and advice, spammers and such will be infracted.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Jul 5, 2009 at 12:53 PM
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    Mystery. [CnC Needed]

    The bolt of lighting seems to be the focal of this tag.
    Also the text isn't top notch and dislocated from the focal of the tag ( the render).
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jul 5, 2009 at 1:09 PM
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    Flow and composition suck.
    Lightning bolt is the focal.
    Way too blurred.
    The text is bad, change it.
     
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    Mystery. [CnC Needed]

    The render is too blury, the text is too modern and the lightning bolt is too obvious.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jul 5, 2009 at 1:40 PM
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    Mystery. [CnC Needed]

    Imo all I see is light. I think you should down the light and up the contrast.
     
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