A story I wrote in sixth grade [Epic WINRAR]

THE ANTIDOTE by nick moses grade 6

The year is 2046. One day a short boy named Bobby was walking to his grandparents' house. When he got there, he found out that his grandfather had cancer. So they did some research and found that there is a cure for cancer but they were missing one thing, a fogikesbo leaf. A leaf from a very smal shrub that only existed in the Stone Age.
Luckily, his grandfather was an inventor and had created a time machine many years before. So Bobby and his grandmother went back in time to find THE ANTIDOTE!
Swooooooosh! All of a sudden the time machine started to shake. Then they both heard a big BANG! The time machine stopped shaking. They opened the door and saw a tropical rain forest, birds flying and singing, monkeys leaping through the trees, and lots of plants. So they started to explore. "RAAAAAAAAWRRRRRR!!!!!!" "I forgot that there's DINOSAIRS!" said Bobby. It's a huge Tyrannosaurus Rex!
said his grandmother
"RUN!!!!!!" they both said at the same time. so they ran and ran until they found a small, dark, and cold gave to hide in. So they started a fire, had some supper, and stayed the night there. but while they were sleeping people caried them to a weird village.
The next day they woke up in a large village called "Uga Uga".
"Wow! this village is huge!" said Bobby. They were fed lots! the village people liked them very much. They gave them the information that they needed to find the leaf. They said " Look behind the waterfall, then right there will find them all." Then a man pointed in a direction in which they went.
After about an hour they saw a huge waterfall.
When they got closer they saw a rainbow. all of a sudden the water stopped flowing. There was a cave there so they went inside Right at the end of the cave there was a fogikesbo shrub! So they got the leaf and went back to the time machine and set the date to 2046 and went back hom.
They got there and mixed the leaf with the other ingredients and fed THE ANTIDOTE to his grandfather and he stood up and hugged his grandson and said, "Thank you."

 

I lol'd at:They opened the door and saw a tropical rain forest, birds flying and singing, monkeys leaping through the trees, and lots of plants. So they started to explore. "RAAAAAAAAWRRRRRR!!!!!!" "I forgot that there's DINOSAIRS!" said Bobby. It's a huge Tyrannosaurus Rex!
said his grandmother
"RUN!!!!!!" they both said at the same time. so they ran and ran

Epic story.
Epic end.

 

wow...education in the states sucks..
but funny

 

You should have made his grandpa a child molester.

Would be a much more interesting story.

 

All he gets is a hug and a nice "thank you", fuck that man.

 

lol wtf did they eat? rocks?

 

They obviously had a good hunt that night.

 

Lemme guess you were digging through old crap and found this? I have all these drawings from when I was in like 2nd grade..they are all bunnies and pokemon for some reason..

 

Why didn't you just call him dumb?

 

Lol I remember when I used to be creative enough to write stories like this, but then school killed my creativity, oh well lol.

 

QFT. Hmm, in 6th grade I did know humans didn't exist some 70 million years back.

 

it's the thought that counts lmfao

 

This was meant to be in the spam forum, lol. Sorry.

 

B I G B A N G Big Bannnnnnnnnng

 

tl;idgaf

 

Yo send this to Scholastic son.

 

My friend wrote a page on the AP Biology test about how his uncle molesters him.

At this point you lost me.

 

i didn't know people spoke english when dinosaurs were here.

 

It's okay .

 

You cure him of cancer and he says thank you?
I would've kept that leaf and burned it in front of him and then kicked him in the lungs