F2p strength pure guide: Please rate and comment to see how i did.

http://www.ehow.com/how_5062322_make-runescape-fp-strength-pure.html

This is the link to it. Please Rate and Comment when your done reading it. Give me comments and tips on how i can improve it. Its my first guide. Thanks.

 

link doesn't work.

 

it does work!

 

8/10 but maybe from 20 to 30 in attack and strength at monks thats what I changed but overall its a good guide keep up the good work!

 

Not bad. I think ill use this when ill create my new str pure

 

Ugh..another do this..then that...guide

 

Lol Thanks Guys And Goodluck Kungfo2.

 

It's not bad..
Not very much detail, and no pictures. (Call me a hypocrit)
I think it could use a bit more detail, remember the guides are for beginers that are looking for a guide to base their first pure around.
Also the format is quick boring, buy I don't know whether you can do much about that.
Other than that, the actual guide itself is quite good for a first guide.

 

No pictures is BAD.

7/10.

 

Ok ima fix that today after skewl. Thanks for the comments.