Struggle (best)

This is definatly my best yet.
Took me some time to do this one. I really concentrated and worked on effects. Made a big difference compared to the others I've made.
Tell me what you think.

RATE AND COMMENT

 

Lighting and clipping's good, though the contrast and brightness of the c4ds on the edges of the render take away attention from the focal.
They also confuse the flow, which could be worked upon.

 

The background is nice, but the left arm of the man is too blurry,
and the text is hideous :s.

7/10

Good job

 

I don't really like these types of "messy" signatures. The text is bad on this one, try using a clipping mask and moving it closer to the focal. The lighting is a tad too bright. I cannot see where the flow is directed to.

 

I love how the render sticks out with the lighting nice effect, but the text is too small and i agree with rigged the text is really blurry!

 

The render fits with the lighting well, the colours match the render/stock, good c4d use, the only bad thing IMO is the text.

8/10 I love it

 

8/10 due to the text, you fix that; it's perfect.

 

9.5/10

Just don't like the text and brown colour.