Optimum (New Sig)

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Optimum (New Sig)
  1. Unread #1 - May 16, 2009 at 11:44 PM
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    I like it.

    Constructive Criticism and 0/10 please.
     
  3. Unread #2 - May 17, 2009 at 4:00 AM
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    It isn't bad at all, I like what you were approaching here. However, the brushing color should have been changed to meet the Optimus Prime's tone. The text, I'm not a fan of though.
     
  5. Unread #3 - May 17, 2009 at 4:20 AM
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    Optimum (New Sig)

    I'm not enjoying the smudging much in this one, but as always, your pentooling is superb.
     
  7. Unread #4 - May 17, 2009 at 7:24 AM
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    I don't like the grungy smudging.
     
  9. Unread #5 - May 20, 2009 at 2:44 AM
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    Not my style, but you did a good job.
    7/10.
     
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    very shit
     
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    I like the smudging. Except on the text :(.
    Take the XS off, it looks stupid.
     
  15. Unread #8 - May 20, 2009 at 10:11 AM
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    thats hellllaa sexy man gj what smudg brush nd settings u use?
     
  17. Unread #9 - May 20, 2009 at 12:35 PM
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    Flow's nice, though there's not really clear lighting, and the smudge on the right hand side is too out of place, and gathers attention. Try to subtle it out a bit, lower opacity, different alyer style or blur.

    There's too much negative space on the left as well, you could try to put XS there to even it out.
     
  19. Unread #10 - May 20, 2009 at 6:40 PM
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    second that opinion ^_^ 8/10
     
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