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  1. Nightlord

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    I maybe new and registered a while ago but I have been browsing these forums for the past couple of months about world of warcraft. I'm interested in giving a runescape pin if anyone can help me write out a song to this type of thing:


    In american government class we got an assignment to write a song/poem about the time when there wasnt any law about food inspection in the past no government inspectors or anything. They were being given hush money to keep quiet it was like the time during the meat factory times

    Were in chicago they had all the meat factories children worked at they injected pigs/cows to fatten them to produce more meat..we seen some images in class today of how it looked like.


    Now we need to write a song about it describing the time. Heres a song a teacher showed us today.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D5oVytjHUOk

    Heres an example he gave us you need to include a verse and the chorus of the song.


    in the year of our lord 1903, in the meat packing plants off the shores of the sea
    stood a young man at his slaughter post a newbie by his side
    he said grind it up and ship it out doesn't matter whats inside
    with the poison bread to kill the rats, an effective tool of trade
    just grind ' em down to sausage it's not hard for a workday's pay
    look busy boy here come the derby coats
    he knows the plan to fool our land so we're all in the same boat


    Chorus:


    Welcome to the jungle of the midwest sea

    miles and miles of these stockyards run wild.
    the biggest in this country it gives our city style
    the world will never know the shape their food is in
    it's not our fault we're worth our salt it's the rest of the world's sin
    there's no law against our action, no law against neglect
    we're doing well in business no matter the effect
    we're the butchers of this country we're the workers in the mud
    We're the slaughterhouse advisors, we're the bleeders of the blood


    So anyone who can write me a good verse and chorus for something like the meat factories in chicago

    and heres an article of it

    Thanks to the best one gets a rs 1 month pin that i will get from **********.
     
  2. jebadiah the wise man

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    You could plagiarize Anything Goes by Guns N Roses, I don't condone this, but it fits pretty well.
     
  3. Tgump

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    Wtf? This was playing as I read your post:

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    GET OUT OF MY HEAD
     
  4. jebadiah the wise man

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    What happens now? Do we have sex or something?
     
  5. ProudCheater

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    Oh hawt jk.
    but erm isnt that good anough >.<

    Edit: just figed it was an example.
     
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