~~~ A Rhyme Coz I'm Bored Again ~~~

growing up, i saw my parents separate early
i'd speak out but no one in my family heard me
an invisible witness, to the family disputes
not knowing why they were fighting, nah i didnt have a clue
brothers goin off, every night meant another blue
there'd be nights where i'd sit down and bury my face
coz i wanted to get away, from the noise that was fillin the place
ive seen broken noses and knife wounds in my living room
i always wanted to live in a stable family where the flowers bloom
but my only escape was the music in my room
i'd bounce my head and wipe the tears in time with the tune
words and punches getting thrown, u could see hate in their eyes
too busy with each other, they couldnt hear my mothers cries
i'd yell to calm the situations down, but no reply
why we put up with each other, only god knows why
but everything started to heal itself over time
my mum and dad haven't, but my brothers have reconciled


lol not trying to be Emo.. just realleh boredddddd

 

Pretty good. Not emo at all. All music has emotion, emo genre which shouldn't even be a genre is just full of winy bitches, which you probably already know.

I liked it, nice one.

 

*Big Hug*

 

thats bad dude!

 

good bad or bad bad lol

 

thats some real shit good stuff 4/5

 

thanks bra

 

that was deep

 

the ending is kind of abrupt, other than that, i liked the topic that you rhymed on, 7/10

 

i like the subject cud do alot with it some lyrics cud use a lil change tho but deep.

glad to see somebody using there brains round here when they write.

very nice