Remembering some old Lyrics

Basically, story is plain and simple. I wrote a song for a girl back in 8th Grade camp. I burnt it because reading it caused too much heart ache.

I'm trying to remember the lyrics for the song now and I will post my progress. Please note its just a summary of the over all idea. It won't really rhyme or flow. Just trying to piece the song back together. I'll be completing it over the next few weeks I hope.

The Girl I could never call mine​

I saw you running and laughing in the grassy hills
I looked on took a deep breath and walked on by
Watching as my Cinderella vanished into the gentle mist

The pain in my heart of knowing you'd never be mine
Only three words I wished I could have whispered to you
Three simple words engraved across my heart for you.

How could I ever dream of calling you mine.
Sleepless nights, wishing you were in my arms

Looking into your eyes was a dagger through the heart
I knew we would always be apart
girl, could I call you mine just for one sunset
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All I can recover so far, its just the basic concept some words were different. I'll try fix them up later on.

 

I like it alot to be honest, could you PM the final draft when you finish?

Thanks, g0d_

 

Alright.

 

That's kinda touching. Nice job, some of it rhymes even if it's not all pieced together.

 

Been busy with exams and stuff lately, Haven't been able to change it and add more . Getting my guitar back soon too! Then hopefully i can record it.

 

I'll steal it from you to win a girl's heart mmkay?

 

mk ^_^

 

that was




sooooooooo gay

 

Thanks

 

for what you have so far, my rating for these lyrics are a 4....out of................................................................................................................................................
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...................................................................5 :idea: