If you like Nirvana READ!!

kk this is a song I wrote, i want your opinion on what you think it means, your interpretation of the song so far ive heard like 5 diff opinions on what it could mean.

uninterested is the name of the song



I think im tired
I want to sleep
find me a way
I need to dream


i am okay
im not okay
i am okay
im not okay


I stay up late
its time to play
Tell me the way
give me a break


i think im tired
i want to sleep
its worth the pay
i need to dream


im not okay
i am okay
im not okay
i am okay


i stay up late
its time play
im not you
im not me

i think im tired
i want to sleep
my minds a stray
i need to dream

i am okay
im not okay
i am okay
im not okay

i stay up late
its time to play
i know everything
i know nothing

i think im tired
i want to sleep
erase the gray
i need to dream



i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i want to sleep CREEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!
i dont want to sleep SLEEP!!!

 

I hate them

 

Looks like the meaning is a guy that's pretty fucking high, and he's has his good trips and bad ones. When he thinks he knows everything he is having a good trip and when he knows nothing he is just so mellowed out he doesn't care.
And when you repeat, I am okay, Im not okay. That's just him freaking out in his own mind whether what's happening to him should be normal.

That's my interpretation of the song

 

thanks and yea when i wrote it it was about getting high but not in a trip way its just about the whole mind set man my views on life you should check out my drawings there stoner drawings look at them and think there pretty cool and yea
and mm im high atm chillin with my dogs and i am okay

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but yea thanks :SD

 

Make it more specific.

 

I'm not trying to be harsh, but I'm gonna be brutally honest here.
These lyrics suck.
It really seems like you were just tripping out and describing it.

 

Even the most simple songs lyrically can be meaningful.

 

If you actually make a video or mp3 file and sing it, i wonder how it will sound

 

I completely agree. D:

They have no meaning whatsoever.

 

you have no creativity the meaning isnt soupossed to be bland and the lyrics dont suck when i can write 1 song and have people come up with more then 4 diffrenet meanings for it, you just dont understand it thats why i labeled it as if you like nirvana read cause any nirvana fan would understand what an interpretation.

just because you didnt find meaning in it doesnt mean there isnt one


look at casey he tottally found a meaning to it

 

Nobody wants to hear a song about being high. They at the least want to hear a song about tripping and the beauty of it. Listen to some Beatles songs like Strawberry Fields Forever and Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds and you'll see what I mean.

Your lyrics are vague. But they are too vague.

 

But what does this have to do with Nirvana?

 

Listen man, this song is not about tripping first of all ive never tripped
dont get me wrong, id love to do acid and ect... just dont know where to get it yet, but yes the beatles did make songs that could be interpreted better than this one but STILL IM NOT THE BEATLES im some random kid on the internet, try using some closer to the same level

like comparing me to green day
a band that sucks ass. my opinion
and im some random kid
where on the same level sorta
when you compare this to any of there songs
its like wow this is actually pretty good
its like comparing the best grape to the best sex
not gonnna work out to well..

get my point?

 

well when i came up with it, i was thinking of a nirvana sounding song
and thats what i think it is..

 

You remind me of myself when you said you would like to try acid, etc... but you don't know where to get them. I had the same problem...

And even though I can totally understand where your coming from with the lyrics, they are a bit vague. Maybe try changing some of the words up or replacing them with new/better ones? Just a suggestion [=

 

Dude that is horrible, it's short, extremely vague, Little to no meaning, and I could just keep going on.

that is a complete insult to Nirvana, and you comparing yourself to any band lol like even greenday , greenday are gods compared to this. I am sorry if this hurts your feelings but I'm being 100% honest.

No one likes short worded repetitive songs, give some meaning help tell the way you're feeling etc.

 

I didn't compare you to the Beatles--I said you should listen to their music and take some pointers from them. You need more specific lyrics with less about emotions and more about real things with a little about emotion mixed in.

 

You can definently tell this song was Nirvana influenced, there's no questions about that

 

No dude it isn't inspired by Nirvana, the only thing I can possibly see is he failed to try to make the lyrics go with the same beat as smells like teen spirit, but that doesn't even fit. This song I did a while back is inspired by Nirvana.

 

DZ666cob, nice way to bring down his lyrics and put in your own, just goes to show you don't have an open mind and ur an ignaramous