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    The background light is too 3D seeing as the fox is more 2D. Clashes a bit. Over all its not bad.
     
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    What would you suggest I do to it?
     
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    I agree.

    As to what you can do is try adding a drop shadow to the fox or try adding more depth to it by shading it or something. Or you can just scratch the background and make a less in depth and more 2-d one.

    Other than that, it's pretty good. (Better than I could do, haha.)
     
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    The render is...kind of bad. Did you do the rendering?
    Try getting some c4ds. There is to much open space around the render. Get some brushes and yeah..

    6/10 keep it up!
     
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    That's what I'm gonna do, I knew I shouldn't have put that star there. Maybe I should just go for a simple 2d background, but what?
     
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    Just something simple with the colors you used before. Just a simple gradient or something might look okay.
    Edit:
    Possibly something like this will look okay:
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    Maybe with some different colors, though.

    Edit 2:
    Also, if you had some sort of glow around the fox, it will help hide the pixelation around it.
     
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    Kinda choppy, yu should figure out a way to remove the choppines
     
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    I think it is very good :) I like it. Rating = 8/10
     
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