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Discussion in 'Showcase Archives' started by +DI-Jerry, Apr 6, 2009.

  1. +DI-Jerry

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    havnt made anything lately :nuts:

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    Holy fuck, nice sigs dude!
     
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    nice sigs i love the first one lol :)
     
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    I think that on the top work, the blue space around the render should have been around 25% more defined, or sharp. There is also a lot of blank space on either side, which may have been more forgivable if your text wasn't so hard (rectangular); Standing out from the entire work as feeling out of place.

    For the second work: The lighting on the work emphasizes the wings on the lady, however the emotion of the subject clearly wants you to pay attention to the hands that come up around her. Try to work on that, and again, choose text that is less sharp.
     
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