Collection of Poems

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Collection of Poems
  1. Unread #1 - Mar 21, 2009 at 8:39 PM
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    Christmas:

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    Nature:

     
  3. Unread #2 - Mar 31, 2009 at 8:17 AM
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    umm i think the emo one is quite stupied pretty pointless
     
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    Reminds me of how I felt the first time I did strong doses of acid. Sometimes natural beauty can overwhelm you to the point where you end all your petty self issues in a second and all you are left with is a calm feeling of satisfaction or maybe even purpose.
     
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    Nature one is the best.
     
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    Sorry mate, but the first line of the first poem makes fail all around. It's almost a death sentence to have any religious views in poetry. It narrows your audience too much, thus making your work, pointless.
     
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    I loved your nature one. It was for sure the best of the 3.
     
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