Basic French, Very, very easy!

Well for the first phrase you should change it to: "Me: Salut! Comment s'appelle tu?". What you wrote doesn't seem to make sense.

EDIT: Infact, my mother used to teach French and I showed her that phrase and she said that it was incorrect.

 

Ça va très mal
Ça va très bien
Tu as quel age?

 

Nicely layed out, I'd include some sports etc and verbs.. But yes Very well written.

 

some is incorrect. Mere (accent grave on the first E) means mother and Pere (also accent grave on the first E) means father.

 

Good but as you say it is VERY VERY basic, I did French studies in Year 9 and i know a bit. Maybe you should add words on how to communicate with your friends in public, the weather, and what you did over the weekda/weekend.