SOTW sig, CnC

No way?? I entered the same stock...



Sorry for the spam, but that is crazy... What a coincidence?

Yours is wayyy better looking then mine. I slacked off alot..

 

*eep* Maybe I'll stay away for SOTW for this week

 

Terrible use of C4D. You created two focal points. One on either side, with a blank space at both 2/3 locations. Your text breaks up the center space, in a sharpness that shouldn't exist in that area. Artistically is has no skill, whatsoever. You are getting better with the effects, you just need to learn where to apply them.

 

I like the clipping mask effect mixed with the c4d, but the c4d on the right distracts from the focal ALOT. Your text is on a power point on the tag so its basically another focal point. The flow is good on the render/stock, however, it would be much better if it was actually the main focal point.

http://alpine.brainkiller.be/Resources/Fullsigtut_techniques.png

This will really help you.

 

Tbh I don't think the stock was needed. As said above, you have 2 focal points. I think the c4d coming down on the right side looks amazing, but if you didn't have the stock it would look better imo. I'm also wondering why you put technology, it gives me a feeling of the jungle rofl. The colors go together into more of a jungle feeling. If it was more blue, and silver I would be thinking technology. It's okay, but overall can be improved.

 

I think its a little empty and maybe try some other c4d's and some more

 

+1

that's the effects were looking for.
But try to apply one focal, blurring the stuff further away and try experimentating with the burn and dodge tool.

 

might not have been intentional but theres two differint focals also your border is way too big theres no flow in this sig also your focal (the guy) is way too small make him bigger need to work on the text

5/10