Newest - Armada

I'm liking this one alot, tell me what you think?

First:


After feedback:

 

Not really a fan, it seems too simple and plain, maybe add more effects to the background.

EDIT: W00T 500'th post!

 

tis looking good, i don't like the excessive negative space on the left though, cut off 30px maybe?

 

I agree that it's a bit cluttered; you could also try off-setting the text, a bit.

 

im not a huge fan. its very basic and plain, and i know you tryed to focus all of the energy near the focal, but its a little bit too cluttered.

 

It looks good. The c4d placement is flawless. The only thing is the text. The font and style itself is fine, it's just it's to much over the energy. Maybe scooting it over to the left and down just a little bit more from the focal.

Definitely a 8/10. 9/10 if the font is fixed.

 

I did off-set the text, as Zy and Sin said, and cropped it for tr1bal

How does it look?

 

Looks pretty good man. The text can stil go a little bit to the right to fit a little more snug in that flow area haha, but it looks good man.

 

Looks pretty sick I think the one after feedback is the best =)

 

2nd one is sick

great effects

 

much nicer

9/10 if it's being rated

 

Sweet, I like it alot better aswell, anyone think I should write a tut?

 

Go for it