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  1. Clank

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    Just made this, I don't mind it, but in all honestly, it is rather bland. Feedbackz pls.

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    I don't know where I've seen it before, but I know I've seen something similar. Maybe I have the stock somewhere or something, I don't know. I do love the text to be honest. Your lighting isn't bad, but maybe you could make it a little less obvious that you used soft brush and changed the blending mode/opacity.
     
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    I'll try make the lighting a little more subtle, and hey, I love the text too :D
    Its a Bioshock stock, so you'll probably have seen it somewhere.
     
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    I have that stock too.
    The sig looks great and yeah, I do like the text too.
    8/10 keep it up!
     
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    nice man =p, better then wat i culd do
     
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    Nice 8/10
     
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    Somewhat nice blending.


    I am not feeling the flow to this piece.
     
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    It depends what you're going for. If you were trying to do a play on Creation, I don't think the green was right for the background. It makes the larger hand fade out and puts the stronger emphasis on the human one. Thus, I see it less as an interaction between the two entities, and more a focus on the human perspective. But, if that's what you're going for, I guess it works.

    I agree that the lighting is very well done, though.
     
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