Turtle Rap

Don't ask, I was really bored and turtles are truly amazing.

Yo turtles? fast and green
Elephants? Fat and mean
Turtles? Wicked and cool
Sloths? boring and drool
turtles? running in da park
mice? afraid of the dark
turtles? Speedy n amazing
Cows? just keep grazing
turtles? best animal eva
frogs? stupid not clever
turtles? live in lakes
bunnies? eaten by snakes
turtles? faster than cars
aliens? live on mars
turtles? snappin and round
slugs? slimy n profound
turtles? coolest thing yet
cats? worst kind of pet​

 

Fix the syllable structure and it will be really good =p

 

Too repetetive for me. Remake it, and make it sound smoother and clearer. It would make it a whole lot better.

 

Too repetitive. Try using actual words throughout your poem.

 

its more of a poem style
but it was actually funny
It was like one of those poems of praise