Cities'

Entered as a competition and as all signatures, I would appreciate some criticism.

 

why do you want critism lol..

anyway

i think the glow on that hill thing should be there ..

If that wasnt there it would own

 

I enjoy criticism on everything I do; I think this was the first semi-positive feedback I have ever received from you.

Thank-you, Draggin.

 

Alright, here's what I see as wrong:

You have a few leading lines. These lines form a 'V' toward the bottom center of the work. There is no focus, object, or emotion at that center.

Though the man seems to be the focal point in this image, he is blended more than the heap of trash, in the same 'fog' as the rest of the scene. This nullifies the emotion of the signature.

Your leading lines should have taken you toward the subject (The man), who should have then been doing something more than standing there, so as he gives off an emotion or reaction to a scene, which is clearly poor, based on the pollution.

 

Thank-you for the criticism, Vision.

 

I think it looks too bright, there's too much light and white.
Also, I think it looks empty, there's no main thing in it if you understand what I mean.

 

Unlike you maybe, people don't like to just be praised for everything that they do. They would much rather like to get some proper feedback so that they can improve.

 

squidge im just saying... people usually say constructive criticism..

not just.. criticism

 

To improve maybe?


I see you being a bit rude to some people around here.( Not this post but some other ones)
Not to make you feel bad but you make people feel bad trying to show some work around here and they would appreciate some honest Constructive Critism, instead of plain Critism with no actual purpose to hurt the person showcasing his work.

You should search the definition of Constructive Critism.