My paper heart.

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My paper heart.
  1. Unread #1 - Feb 6, 2009 at 12:08 PM
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    My paper heart.

    She did what she wanted,
    He said yes, obviously.
    I saw it early on before,
    They even new themselves.

    I think even then it broke my heart,
    But atleast it was only in two,
    I could manage with that but then,
    Along came a pain, Something new.

    I hope she's happy, I hope it's what,
    She needs to be happy , if not more.
    Maybe I'm not right for her anyway,
    Its probably happened before.

    They told the others, our group,
    But not me, not the one who needed,
    To know most whether it was true,
    And that what I'd seen was all but-

    True love at first sight,
    I guess it happens every so often,
    The two people who make the whole,
    Heart, straight from the middle,
    Leaving all the leftover paper,
    Like me. Just like me.


    This came straight from the heart.

    Thoughts?
     
  3. Unread #2 - Feb 6, 2009 at 12:12 PM
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    My paper heart.

    I think im in love with ur lyrics..
    Make more, i like them =)

    Yondaime
     
  5. Unread #3 - Feb 6, 2009 at 12:22 PM
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    My paper heart.

    Actually pretty good. Im a pretty good singer but im dreadful at writing lyrics. Well done mate.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Feb 6, 2009 at 1:06 PM
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    My paper heart.

    Good Lyrics :) I like the theme. Little downcast and romantic.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Feb 6, 2009 at 2:25 PM
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    My paper heart.

    Like my life. :p
     
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