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CnC and stuff aye.

 

I hope you choke to death on a piece of celery that has been slowly marinating in horseradish for going on 2 centuries.

Also, nice sig.

 

Nice flow with the colors. Looks real good.


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DID YOU POST THIS IN IRC? :}

 

I might have

 

I actually really dislike the C4D that you used in the background as leading lines to the subject. Though it's a great idea for focus purposes, the item itself is very aliased.

If it's not a C4D, I still believe this needs to be fixed.

 

It's nice, the glare to the left looks a bit bright maybe tune down the Opacity.

8/10

 

I like it but the the render needs to be blended a bit more can see white around the edges.

 

With the C4D maybe if it was more transparent. Or not have it at all. But i <3 the way the text goes with the gold dress on the chick.

6/10

 

Not a fan of the C4D.

7/10

 

Thats good, the C4D matches the stock, 8/10.

 

The C4D was only there to draw your eyes to the focal, not to look cool or what not.

 

You need to add some effects to the background, just looks like a copy and paste picture in the background.

 

The problem is that the C4D is so sharp that it draws just as much focus as the focal point.

 

'swat I was thinkan

 

It's only there to help create depth.

Alright, thanks very much for your criticism, I'll be sure to keep it in mind if I ever make a sig of this style again.

 

The light source shouldn't be there ><. Put it to the south east of her body and put it on soft light.