Experimenting with pentool and sig

comment rate please

 

It's lacking something...

I wonder what...?

 

That is pretty damn good in my opinion! I don't think its lacking anything. The only 2 things I don't like is the text/font, and the speckle on the chick's forehead. Besides that I really like it, nice depth and good choice of colors. I see on the bottom left side you have a gradient map of a paint splat that goes with her shirt, I think you should put some more (gradient maps) on the right side of the signature also with the same piece of stock. Keep it up!

 

I like it although it's kinda weird and some shaddered look alike glass on there might look better if it wasnt there.

 

Not my taste, very cluttered and messy.

 

i like it, im a bit of a fan of busy signatures, there usually more to look at then.
dunno about the pen tool in the middle, it looks a little off.
other than that, its a very nice sig, good job

 

Ok, thanks for you're comments what could i improve next time?

 

I really dislike the text... The glow on it looks odd. Also, some of the splatters obstruct the main focal. Aside from that, it's all good.

 

Try using the pentool a little bit more. It adds a nice effect.

Otherwise: awsome !

 

Don't like the the pentooling on the text or the glow around the text. It's good other than that

 

I kind of like it although its abit messy. 7/10.