Dear Sythe, Need help with Essay conclusion PLEASE. Essay inside.

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  1. Unread #1 - Jan 28, 2009 at 2:42 PM
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    Dear Sythe, Need help with Essay conclusion PLEASE. Essay inside.

    Well, I need help with a conclusion for this essay. I don't know what to put, and I am staying home from school today.

    My teacher will be really mad if I don't get this done, so I ask you for help.

    If anyone could write up a short conclusion for me on this, it would be greatley appreciated. Thank you.

    This essay is on Global Terrorism, focusing on 9/11.










    In the September 11 attacks of 2001 that Al Qaeda released on the World Trade Center, at least 2095 people died, and over 3051 children lost parents. George W Bush’s tactics to fight Global Terrorism, have already taken over 72,000 lives and counting. Canada plays the secondary/support role in the war against terrorism. Canada aids the United States in the war they initiated on Global Terrorism.

    Since 1990, Al Qaeda has released several attacks mainly on Military, and civilian targets in various countries around the world. Al Qaeda’s objectives include the end of foreign influence in Muslim countries, and the creation of a new Islamic Caliphate. Foreign countries are cooperating with the United States in prevention of other terrorist attacks on the United States.

    The war on terrorism is dominated by the United States. George W Bush initiated the war on terrorism, after the September 11 attacks. The 2001 attacks were claimed to be an attack on the free world, but a landmark of America was targeted, and this happened on American soil. George W Bush has asked Canada to play a role in their war, as well as getting help from other foreign countries.

    Al Qaeda is organized throughout many countries, therefore making it hard to fight back. The war on terror is a war on an unknown number of people, distributed through an unknown number of countries. There is no way to tell when we have won, the only way of knowing we have one is when there has been a long period of time without terrorist attacks, then we will know we have won. If a terrorist attack were to happen on Canada, it would mean increased economical and Military fields on the part of Canada.
     
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    Dear Sythe, Need help with Essay conclusion PLEASE. Essay inside.

    You can't really write a conclusion paragraph to a essay that isn't even structured properly..
     
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    Dear Sythe, Need help with Essay conclusion PLEASE. Essay inside.

    sythe is not your personal army :p
     
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    Dear Sythe, Need help with Essay conclusion PLEASE. Essay inside.

    it looks like you just copied and pasted an article from a site
     
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    Dear Sythe, Need help with Essay conclusion PLEASE. Essay inside.


    Thanks, i'll take that as a compliment.

    It's not a full essay, it's just what I have so far, my teacher told me how to do it like that, I go to a learning center, everything is fucked up there.

    Stop being a bunch of dicks.
     
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