Anti Scam Song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3kLZLcCujnM

If anyone cares to embed it, be my guest. It was just white when I tried.

Yeah so.. I wrote the rap in about 5minutes, little inspiration, got my point accross, etc.. Flow is sort of lacking because I didn't set up seperate audio tracks.

Excuse the cornyness. First vid/recording. Working on some higher quality stuff

Lyrics:

It’s not the way to go
When you’re rollin in the dough
You’re betta off
Mow-in
Yo lawn
From dusk til dawn,
Early in the mawn
I got it goin on

Gotta be legit,
Take none of it
Life is not a skit,
Take out my kit
What I see fit
Stayin legit,
None of this,
Bit

Scamming is for fools,
All you do is loose,
Sip some odouls
Cause you’re not cool
What am I in school?
What is wrong is cool
Jump in pool
And dive in

Where do I begin
Lift up your chin
Forgot some skin?
A part of your life,
Resortin to a knife?
Pain is now strife?
I thought this was sythe

Dig in deep,
It’s something to keep,
You don’t wanna sweep
Up your mind
Now is not the time,
Lookin for a sign?
A sign is not a shrine
Pay all your fines
Cause your money’s not mine
Lemon without lime
Dime for dime

 

Good job, I like it.

 

Very nice, but i like odouls! =[

 

What is even the purpose of making this? You know what other things you could have done in 5 minutes.

 

I felt like making it to test some audio stuff, etc. What's the problem with that?

 

What is even the purpose of asking such a stupid ass question?

At least he is being productive, you jackass.

 

Ha, yea your right. He's being productive on a website for "RUNESCAPE". Don't get mad because I asked your man a question, and you should stop thinking forums are this serious...

Seriously man, I'm trying to look out for you.. I'm tired of people like you getting beat up at school for taking the internet so serious.

 

The fact that you know people getting beat up at school for taking the internet too seriously tells a lot about you.

 

nice song dude... you should be promoted to.... rap-moderator ?

 

lool so inventor, but good.

 

I like it, out of all the music songs I've heard this one is one of the best I've heard in a long time.

 

Good to hear

 

I'll listen it .... Lmao, cool song

 

Lawl its a good song, ty for sharing. xD

 

Lolwut...

Dude. A lot of your lyrics don't make sense. Beat was, decent.

*EDIT*

OMG. Rapping is not your thing, 'son'. T_T

 

Some lyrics don't make sense, well done for trying though.

 

A for Effort, I didn't really like it that much. It might have been better if it went with the actual song rythem, but it was ok.

 

I like tht

 

Lol.

I laughed threw most of it. Your lyrics make no sense, but that makes it all the more funny.

+1 on this, haha.

 

You're crazy inventor is pro.