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  1. geio

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    My latest siggy, DON'T LOOK !

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    [​IMG] and this( my SOTW entry ) .
    Just made one, tried new style etc, and i am noob at graphix i know...
    CnC
     
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    My latest siggy, DON'T LOOK !

    I think that really looks nice.
    The smoke and light around the render looks awesome, and the placing of everything looks just right.
    text matches it and looks great, and the whole right side of the sig is good.

    I can't really fault you on anything.
     
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    Tyvm:) .
     
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    My latest siggy, DON'T LOOK !

    the first one is ........... wierd depth? focal is messed up...
    smudging is pretty good, but you kinda want your focal the sharpest thing, at least in this case, where your c4d is sharper.


    #2 .. its better
    i dont really like that ... motion blur? kinda makes the render look wierd..needs depth
    its a little messy, a bit monotone, but again the smudging is good.
    keep workin on them, you have the idea just gotta execute it better.
     
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    Dude this is amazing o_o don't look down on yourself xP if you would i'll take that sig xP
     
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    My latest siggy, DON'T LOOK !

    The dark marks on the right of the first sig looks out of place. The render looks too blurry on the first one.

    Second one looks great, except for that dark part on the left.

    Great sigs overall.
     
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    overall i'd have to say your sigs are 6/10...keep it up :)
     
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    In the future, consider the 'rule of thirds' or 'leading lines' rules of photography in your works.

    Also, to improve upon your text, try to make them become a part of your work, rather than just be text inside it. For example; Create a work, like this, with the text itself looking like the ice/fire, or whatever that is.
     
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