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    Black and red would go good with this effect. Everything else seems, descent.

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    hmm

    its a bit choppy, especially on the bottom
    the glowing line, may be a bit too big..

    and if you really wanted you could add detail to the blue part to add more depth..
    maybe work on a smaller sized version?
     
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    Try working with the neon a bit more, but without using layer masking.

    The biggest problem with this work - Your text should not have been distorted. Just set it back at a distance, with perspective, but don't distort it along the top as you have here. It's not appealing to the eye when you've distorted it two ways.
     
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    The white line seems too thick, and it goes weird on the top-left.
     
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    Shouldn't that glow line follow the top blue part?
     
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    The white brushing/glow doesn't work like it should.
    Try to improve this.
     
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    it looks pretty sweet, i dont like the white glow being over the leftside of the v, it just doesnt look quite right to me. but other than that its pretty cool looking. how long did it take to make?
     
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    i like the text itself but the neon blue part is quite big you should of made it just a little bit of an offset off text not that big.
     
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    I actually like this sig....kind of reminds me of the OREO cookie logo ?

    Free cookies pl0x ? lawl :p
     
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