Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

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Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.
  1. Unread #1 - Jan 22, 2009 at 7:45 PM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    You Hide Behind Your Friends,
    They Won't Be There Forever,
    I'll Be Right There Waiting,
    In My Hands, Your Cadaver,
    You'll Beg For Your Life,
    They'll All Wonder How You Died,
    I'll Rape You With My Knife,
    Cause I'm Just The Charming Type.
    [Chorus]
    You Claim You'll Stop,
    You're To Fucking Weak,
    I Could Care Less,
    You'll Be Dead Next Week,
    They Won't Find Your Body,
    Cause It's Right Next To Me,
    Pick Up The Bottle,
    Cause You're Just To Weak,
    [End Chorus]
    [Mini-Breakdown]
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
    [End Breakdown]
    You Never Tried,
    To Break The Addiction,
    That's Exactly Why,
    You're In This Position,
    I Wonder Why,
    Noone Even Cried,
    When They all Found Out,
    That You Had Died,
    [Chorus]
    xxxxxxxx
    [End Chorus]
    Now Your Gone,
    I Can Finally Relax,
    I'll Take A Bubblebath,
    In Bloody Thumbtacks,
    Now Your Gone,
    I Can Finally Laugh,
    I'll Cut Your Friends,
    In Fucking Half,
    You Can Try To Run,
    But You Can't Hide,
    I'll Pour Acid,
    In Your Left Eye.
    [Chorus again -.-]
    [End Chorus (Again)]
    [Breakdown]
    You Want Vodka,
    Well That's Too Damn Bad,
    I've Got A Hammer,
    Just Let It Meet Your Head,
    You Want Whiskey,
    Well Isn't This Incredible,
    I Killed An Addict,
    I Got A Gold Medal,
    [End Of This Breakdown]
    [Chorus]
    [End Chorus]
    [Breakdown Again :D]
    You're All Fucking Gay,
    Scene Kids Are Gay,
    You're Fucking Gay,
    Vegitarians Are Gay,
    [Pause]
    We're Really Cool,
    Murder Is Cool,
    Eating Meat Is cool,
    Abortions Are Cool,
    This Song Is Fucking Cool,
    Play This Shit,
    In Your School,
    Show Your Teacher,
    Your Skin Tool,
    Get Suspended,
    Blame It On Us,
    Bring Your Girlfriend,
    To Our Bus.
    [End Breakdown.
    And Song]
     
  3. Unread #2 - Jan 22, 2009 at 8:04 PM
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    No..never again please.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Jan 22, 2009 at 8:06 PM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    You Said Please,
    I Don't Give A Fuck Thank You.
    Gtfo My Thread Nigganugget.
     
  7. Unread #4 - Jan 22, 2009 at 8:25 PM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    Obvious troll is obvious.
     
  9. Unread #5 - Jan 23, 2009 at 12:42 AM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    you got the nerve to talk **spit** about other peoples lyrics...

    kyd stop...

    its not there for you...dont ever try to write freestyles, flows or raps anytime
     
  11. Unread #6 - Jan 23, 2009 at 1:00 AM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    ehh good for brutality... some if it was corney tho...

    Scene Kids Are Gay,
    You're Fucking Gay,
    Vegitarians Are Gay,


    We're Really Cool,
    Murder Is Cool,
    Eating Meat Is cool,
     
  13. Unread #7 - Jan 23, 2009 at 5:39 AM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    Hmm I believe I have heard some of the pieces of lyrics somewhere... but if you came up w\ it on your own it starts off decent I guess but turns pretty lame.
     
  15. Unread #8 - Jan 23, 2009 at 6:30 AM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    A little depressing, but I love the way you expressed emotion in dull short lines.
    Ha, Anyway to make it more like a song, Try verses and choruses (Correct format)
     
  17. Unread #9 - Jan 24, 2009 at 12:40 AM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    Ehh, its meh. It sounds like a Brutal Death Metal band or Waking the Cadaver type stuff.
     
  19. Unread #10 - Jan 24, 2009 at 11:59 PM
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    sucks. find talent or get lucky
     
  21. Unread #11 - Jan 25, 2009 at 12:06 AM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    Boring, I'd rather have my eardrums surgically removed.

    Edit: Being serious now, I really don't like it.
     
  23. Unread #12 - Jan 26, 2009 at 1:29 AM
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    "Song I wrote because I'm Brutal"

    You mean Br00tal.

    Your scene sucks.

    Adhering to a scene that promotes dismay, holding in your feelings, crying about your feelings endlessly, and embracing death as a course of action instead of part of life's course, is detrimental to your overall being.

    Please listen to some ska. It'll cheer you up and you certainly need cheering.
     
  25. Unread #13 - Jan 26, 2009 at 9:27 AM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    I dont like it, i dont think it's good, sry :p
     
  27. Unread #14 - Jan 26, 2009 at 6:21 PM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    You sir need to learn about Death / Black Metal.
     
  29. Unread #15 - Jan 26, 2009 at 9:47 PM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    eh sounds like something ICP would do.
     
  31. Unread #16 - Jan 26, 2009 at 11:52 PM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    Not to be a dick or w.e but im kinda in a metalcore band right.
    Its all that "emo/scene" shit right.
    I dont see how its gay.
    it is what it is ya know?
    im not scene or emo, but i scream and play guitar, does that make me gay because i listen to the type of music that is classified under scene and emo?
     
  33. Unread #17 - Jan 27, 2009 at 11:46 AM
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    Song I Wrote, Cause I'm Brutal.

    So what do you do with your life is what I am wondering...
     
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