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  1. The True Gears

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    Main focus is the lighting

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    wow looks very nice you think you can make me a Siggy?..
     
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    Good but I think it's a bit too light.
     
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    Made it bright so it can catch the eye ;)
     
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    Yea, but I think it's too light, I almost need sunglasses so my eyes don't get hurt.
     
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    Yeah lol
     
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    Maybe try to make another one without much light. A bit darker. I think it might look better. Just a suggestion. :)
     
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    looks nice to me, very eyecatching.
     
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    nice advert, but only trolls join that crappy forum, lol. i heard all of sythe's faggots go there.
     
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    Lower the opacity of your lighting. I can see exactly where you used the larger white brush. To me the lighting needs to be more subtle
     
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    Didnt use any brushing :\ does seem alot like it though.

    Thanks for the CNC
     
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    Excellent eye catcher. If the focus were more to the right side of the piece it would draw more towards the gray text which is a little subtle. Also, the viewer doesn't have a clear understanding of what your site has to offer without having to read a small amount of text (yes I know, it is small, but most people will skim right over it).

    Overall aesthetically pleasing and well flowing, just no center of focus.

    Well done.
     
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    bad lighting.
     
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    How did you add the lighting then? Lens flares or whatever? There are just a few places where you kinda have to squint to see it. Just make a few changes and you'll have some really great work on your hands.
     
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    It was actually extremely easy :) ill pm how I did it to you if you want to know.

    I ended up doing it on accedent
     
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    Yeah that'd be great! Thanks alot Gears
     
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    I love it, c4d spam and rainbow gradients are my favorite :p .
     
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    It's very eye pleasing.
    A cool logo, but i think you could make the: '****' bit bigger because i'm guessing that's the name of the site ?
    I also wonder why all the links on the right are all spaced differently apart ?

    EDIT: Don't know why the 'I S T P' bit is starred out ? :S
     
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    I like it. it's very eye catching, making me wanna go check it out (which i will do..a bit later).
     
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    loved it really stood out to me :)
     
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