The "Take a song and rewrite it" Rap battle thread.

Alright, rules are simple.

Take a song, and rewrite it. Make sure sentence structure and total syllables per line stay the same. make sure you rap battle though. Also try to follow the rules of rhyming.

For example, here is an excerpt from "In da Club" by 50 Cent

This passages follows the pattern of AABB. Meaning lines one and two rhyme and lines three and four rhyme.

Now this is what you are supposed to do

Make sure to post the original song title and artist.

 

Wow thats a drag.

50 cents syllables:
11
11
12
10

Your syllables:
12
13
14
12

so in reality, you just failed yourself >_<

I really dont understand the point of this though...