My essay-dont spam it please, I need CnC.

-I know this isnt even remotely good, but I just started it 23 minutes ago, and It is due tomorrow. What this is about-The significance of George and Lennie's dreams.

Everybody has dreams. Some people dream of becoming billionares, while others dream of getting married, having a house, or anything else they aspire to have or do. For two great men, George and Lennie, they work hard to make their dreams a reality.

George Milton and Lennie Smalls have many dreams. They want to get their own ranch house, raise live stock, life off of the fat of the land . . . Their main dream consists of getting a ranch house that they can call their own. They dream of being their own bosses, so they dont have to worry about being fired. This dream inspires them to do all of the back breaking work, and bucking barley, and all of the other odd jobs the do, so they can achieve this dream. This dream is what keeps them going, and without a dream, it would all be meaningless.

Another dream Lennie has is to raise the rabbits. I think this dream of Lennie's shows how kind he is, and that he means no harm by what he says or does. I do not think this dream will end up happening though. Lennie, as kind as he is, is to strong. He would go to pet the bunnie's, and end up killing them. But Lennie wants this more than anything, so thats probobly what inspires him to go on with his life.

George has some dreams too. One of his goals was to have a wife, a stable job that made him money, a house, but all of that was only if he was smart. His other dreams consisted of getting the ranch, making money, sometimes going out for a drink, and probobly many more dreams which arent specified. Although he has many dreams, I think the reasons behind his dreams are all more important. The author doesnt directly tell you, but you can infer that when he was younger, his life wasn't very easy. He always acts though, he is very over protective of Lennie, and he always just seems a little on edge. From his experience on ranch's, you could probobly assume his family had one when he was a child, and it was probobly taken during the depression, which is why he wants this so badly.

Need a conclusion paragraph, give me some ideas!​

 

Mice and men?

 

yes.

 

I just finished reading the book for the 2nd time while on Zypur, a couple of minutes ago.

BTW - It's not just an assumption that Lennie's too strong. He destroys that poor animal. );

Sorry, though, I don't see any conclusion paragraphs as of now for your essay.

 

Hey James! How are you dude?

 

ROAR! I said n0 sp4m n00b! lol.

 

I can't actually read, so...

 

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Do it and I will keel you.

 

Do It

 

Typo.

When you use the adj "the",you make it sound like you have a group of rabbits you are referring to in particular.Get rid of it.

Why the past tense?Does he still have these goals in this book you are writing about?

Post the name of the book,please.

 

You do see the irony in this right?

 

Yes,you have iron man in your sig and you refer to "irony"

 

no he told him not to spam his thread, yet it is located in the spam section, where the whole point is to SPAM.

 

Yes yes,I know.I remmember one time someone here said,

Was funnier than this..

 

That is funnier, I was just pointing out the irony in his post.

 

Code:

[Indent] Everybody has dreams. Some people dream of becoming billionaires, while others dream of getting married, having a house, or anything else they aspire to have or do.  For two great men, George and Lennie, they work hard to make their dreams a reality.



[Indent] George Milton and Lennie Smalls have many dreams. They want to get their own ranch house, raise live stock, life off of the fat of the land . . . Their main dream consists of getting a ranch house that they can call their own. They dream of being their own bosses, so they don't have to worry about being fired. This dream inspires them to do all of the back breaking work, and bucking barley, and all of the other odd jobs the do, so they can achieve this dream.  This dream is what keeps them going, and without a dream, it would all be meaningless.




[Indent] Another dream Lennie has is to raise the rabbits. I think this dream of Lennie's shows how kind he is, and that he means no harm by what he says or does. However, I do not think this dream will end up happening. Lennie, as kind as he is, is too strong. He would go to pet the bunnie's, and end up killing them. But Lennie wants this more than anything, so that's probably what inspires him to go on with his life.




[Indent] George has some dreams too. One of his goals was to have a wife, a stable job that made him money, a house, but all of that was only if he was smart.  His other dreams consisted of getting the ranch, making money, sometimes going out for a drink, and probably many more dreams which aren't specified. Although he has many dreams, I think the reasons behind his dreams are all more important. The author doesn't directly tell you, but you can infer that when he was younger, his life wasn't very easy. He always acts though, he is very over protective of Lennie, and he always just seems a little on edge.  From his experience on ranch's, you could probably assume his family had one when he was a child, and it was probably taken during the depression, which is why he wants this so badly.

I fixed conventions, however I didn't read it enough to make a conclusive paragraph.

 

Yes, I know. I remember one time some here said,

Fixt.