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  1. Unread #1 - Nov 14, 2008 at 4:57 PM
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    halp.
     
  3. Unread #2 - Nov 14, 2008 at 5:56 PM
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    Looks, nice in my eyes, a bit basic but so is mine.

    Try to adjust some fonts you placed in the entry like: Welcome and art for sale they look displaced compared to the way the other text is set up.
     
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    Not trying to be insulting, but it's funny to see all these new people try to do web designs.
    they all look so similar :p

    Suggestions:

    Remove the gradients from the borders. Those would be a nightmare to code, and the look rather cheap.
    The gradient on the background isn't that nice either. Try using a darker shade of the brown instead of just black.

    Add more padding to your boxes, and remove the hyphenation.

    Add more detail. It doesn't look like a lot of work was done here.
     
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