lol read this

I wrote this for school;

Have you felt the riches of a poor man?
Have you seen the vision of a blind man?
Have you been picked up by a crippled man?
Under the roof of my Shangri-La, will I return again?
On will I continue my compaign
To shoot the bastard who led me to that place,
His mind, it will erase.
Yet, now, I see the halo in the sky.
Why can I not fly?
To coerce the Gods to shout with all their might,
To be heard, and to fight.
Where is Rommel, where is Gandhi.
Where is a poor man, where is a blind man.
Where is a cripple, to heal the body




I'm a sophomore, so I could actually use language

It was like a collaboration of songs/added/taken out lyrics..

pretty epic for 5 minutes.

 

republicans arent allowed to write poetry?

explain

 

First english assignment this year.

lol, i got a 40/50 on it..

cause it had no meaning..

 

y/n?

 

yes.

i thinks.

 

sweet, guys, keep flaming away! thanks for reading. lol

rate it out of 10. i give it a 3/10.

 

mine = 8/10.

yours = 2/10 cause it's ghey.

 

thanks for the rating!

i have two more: Read them and rate them too please

School Days
Apples
My Pumpkin - same one as before
thanks!

 

spam.

 

read and rate please. thanks

 

I post this somewhere else.

 

what???

 

I SAID READ THEM!!!

School Days
Apples
My Pumpkin

 

no...

 

YES! READ IT!