SOTW #10 Entry - Sprite Sig

Opinions? CnC, etc.

EDIT:

This is my first sprite sig.

 

I like the background and the text but the sprite doesen't really fit in at all, I don't know, maybe it's meant to be like that, don't know much about sprite stuff lol.

 

The text is lacking. It's just "there", not really flowing. And when your text is in a corner, it takes away from the focal, which I assume is the sprite. The sprite isn't blended, it looks like you duped it, and filtered the dupe behind it.

Read the rules of photography, and look at the points as to place your sprite so it draws the viewers eye to a focal point: http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=312649

Hope that helps.

 

smudge in the feet of the sprite a bit more, and maybe added some bubble c4ds and e3ffect c4ds behind it........also a wireframe may have looked good

 

the sprite is floating in the middle of the tag.

 

Billy, do you clean up vomit? Just kidding, it's alright. I have seen you do better.

 

Agreed.
Plus the text looks out of place.

 

not bad , work on the background ..

 

the poke is too cahrp for me, and it can be a lil bigger