newSIG CnC

CnC please, do not just say "it looks good", give reasons so i can improve.

 

your lacking blending and effects. the white line in the middle draws your attention to the outside of the signature. you also need to work on your text and lighting.

 

By effects please be specific.

I didn't want a light source, wanted to keep it dark.

Thanks for you advice.

 

I don't like your fonts for some reason ...

 

i dont really like the white line looks like it shouldnt be there, and maybe use some different brushes to smude and blent it in with the background dosnt looks like the picture is blending in with anything, but keep it up id recoment customizing the leaf brush abit, ive started to use works well if you do like 5 layers of smudging getting closer to the picture everytime ,

 

In this sig, I can see everything and I would be able to tell you exactly what you did an probably what tut you used. Your final render should not be so noticeable. Like, I can see the outline of it, and it doesn't look like it belongs there. A good artist makes it look as if the render is suppose to be there.

Also, your colors are bad. Your smudging doesn't really match the face color and everything so it looks awkward. Look up some smudging tuts

What is up with the white line?

 

Text is ok, I don't like the smudged effect behind the focal.

 

Thanks for all your advice,if you guys have any particular tutorials in mind please post a link.

 

Thanks, i will take that into consideration.