1 month break off my pc

i took a months break off my pc for school and im getting back into sig making CnC wanted and appreciated.

 

The only thing i can see that needs improvement is your text, otherwise not bad.

 

yeah i always sucked a text placement

 

You need a focal

 

It somewhat is lacking a focal point in it, and try integrating the text more with the signature because it's kind of... bland. Other than that it's not bad for being gone for quite some time.

 

yea i sorta fucked it up i tried to use simple text but i can give it another crack at it

 

I second that, focal depth better lighting look up the terms and try to use thm in later works.