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  1. Articulo Mortis

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    Ok well, this is my first ever website design...
    Don't diss cause it's not a sig (I know LOTS of people do that around here)
    Any help would be greatly appreciated, and as I work on this more I will update pics.

    I still need to add the main body background and features, so don't say it's plain, lol.
    Also, the grey is the background, whatever is empty, is not done.


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    Everything is good except for the grey bottom, get rid of that and it's a guddun.
     
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    Looks nice add some blood spatters on the black background, and I understand that it isn't done yet.
     
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    read the bold text next time ._.
     
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    I did, that's why I said get rid of it.
     
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    It's not done fucktard.
    WIP = WORK IN PROGRESS.

    Very nice work so far!
    I don't think you guys realise, it's not like a sig where you just put random brushes on it. Web design takes days.
     
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    Indeed it does.
    Also: updated pic. It's kind of.. crap, the progressions i did.
     
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    I know what WIP means.

    I know how long it takes to do Web Design.

    Also, I said get rid of it in the sense of putting something there like a black BG.

    Now STFU.
     
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    You go around saying shit about everyone's work so why don't you STFU?
    You don't even give constructive criticism.
     
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    Where have I said shit about someones work?
     
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    The search box is bad.
    The faded effect on the second picture is bad.
    The right column could be better.
    Don't use serif fonts on a page with a grunge theme, imo. (the second paragraph)

    Everything else is surprisingly pretty good.

    You have my applause.
     
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    Woah, applause from Jansen!
    Cheers dude, I'll fix that stuff up soon
     
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    Nice design, Just a little to much space wasted around that tag IMO
     
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    It isn't a tag einstein.
     
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    Actually it is LOL
     
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    You carried the theme throughout the whole thing nicely. However, I think the search box is misplaced.

    And to Boxwood, if you want to argue, you can take it to pms. Do try to be a little more informative, as well.

    He meant the tag inside the work. Not as in a signature hehe.
     
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    Back off my box.

    On topic, that snapshot you have, tilt it the opposite direction from the rss feed it'll just look better. Better than I could do By the way.
     
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    Tag is another word for signature sorry !*shame*
     
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    Ah ok, that's aiight
     
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    Will do sir, shall update soon
     
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