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[Paid] Razzo
  1. Unread #1 - Sep 13, 2008 at 9:10 PM
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    This was a for-profit project, I just felt like showcasing.

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    Very nice, what type of theme did you try to incorporate?
     
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    Bit simple, the lines on the right pattern could just be done with a hard round brush, some pattern and to strong lighting I don't like it.
     
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    I really like the sig, you don't always have to put alot effects into a sig to make it nice...

    This is an example for a plain and simple sig without alot of effects...

    I like the colouring, style of the text, I just like it!!!

    9/10;)

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    Yes, a signature can be simple, but to us advanced graphics artists, we can see how it was made in simple steps.

    I find that this one isn't really good because Vision could do better.
    Example: The text with the 3 pixel stroke and choppiness and the overdone lighting
     
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    Ok, i agree with the overdone lightning, but the text with the 3 pixel border adds a cool effect to this sig and just make it cool:D

    Tip for Vision:
    I noticed this just a moment ago, but the 'azzo' from 'Razzo', the 'a' of 'azzo' is behind the 'Razzo', its just a minor detail, but if you make that straight its a cool sig:D
     
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    I made the A in that way on purpose.

    Haunted: This was a paid project, and was inspired by something very similar in design. it's not really that I wanted to make this design, but more that I had to follow a theme I was given by the purchaser. He liked it, and overall, that's what was important.
     
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    Ok, i didnt know that, only wanted to mention it so you could deliver better work and maybe earn moe money:D
     
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    Honestly, if I were working with my own personal style, given my own free will to make something, I would make something better. When your given a style that is someone else's and told to duplicate that, it's not going to show your best work.
     
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    Could not have said that better myself.

    Nicey done, by the way. I like how you used the chosen name as part of the background, that's something I like to do as well.
     
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    I know that, but you asked for CnC and I gave it so you could work on the design.

    With paid work reputation is more important then the work itself.

    Example: When durial was on the forum he automaticly won all gfx battles because of his name, and everyone would suck up to him.

    He knew that and he used it to sell signatures for rl money, even his old ones which used downloaded grunge brushes and other old techniques that are considered noob nowadays amongst the real designers, and they still sold like taking candy from a baby.

    People will buy all stuff from you even crappy work when you are looked on upon.
     
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    I'm sorry to say I don't really like it. Just the fact that the colors are putrid and the use of c4d looking things. I'm not any gfx expert but I just don't think it looks very good.
     
  25. Unread #13 - Sep 14, 2008 at 4:30 PM
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    there are no c4d's in it right? the thing on the right is a pattern and i dont see a c4d...

    correct me if im wrong!
     
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