My works In progress

this is mainly a background abstract



my other works need CnC and before i post the final outcome id like feedback on what i can improve from the sythe community.

 

They're all good. keep it up. you wanna make m3 1?

 

The first one is OK.

The second one isn't your best. I don't like it too much because your focal point is at the right, which it shouldn't be. It should be either in the middle, or if you do decide to put it in the right or left, make sure your signature flows to the opposite side of the render.

The third one has too much of one same color. If I can guess, what you did was picked a hot pink color - use Clouds - and used one brush with a certain setting. You don't want to hurt the viewers eyes, because that color hurts mine.
I don't work too much with abstracts, but I can say that you should download different kinds of brushes, and test each of them out.

 

thanks dave I'm going to good for brushes right now

 

nice man, id love one if u could make one for me? PM me Please.

 

I liked the first and the second but i didnt like the third at all. Possibly make the third less vibrant?

 

yeah i wasn't trying to over do it but touch it up enough to make it nice. Maybe i should of toned it down a little

 

Yea i think it would look much better toned down.

 

Lol 1st name, black woman.

 

With a good render and some work that abtract background could be very very nice.