newly made today

C&C needed i read a tut before doing this one tell me how it came out

 

I like the effect that you used, and the whitespace between the render really adds to it, I'd say the text really lets it down though.

 

yeah I'm bad at deciding text i need to work on that

 

Nice. 5/10. Text needs redoing.

 

I must say, what on earth is going on? Its incredibly blurry, and theres to white much space. Update the text, and it could look great.

 

Way over-blurred....

 

Please use better text as it could really boost the sig, and not too much blur next time would be good.