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  1. Rawr

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    Okay so this is the third signature I've ever made. My brushes are working now but I think I may have overdone it.

    Rate and tell me what you think.

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    v1 - 7/10
    v2 - 5/10
     
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    Really? I kind of like the v2 better.
     
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    Updated, I changed the font and added one more stroke in the background. I quite like it now.
     
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    I like it. It has nice flow to it. Good work!
    The only thing I don't like is the focal point... But that's just me lol
     
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    Yeah, it is kind of all over the place. >_<
     
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    Looks pretty good but not my choice of sig lol
     
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    Don't get discouraged! You getting better! Practice makes perfect!
     
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    True, and it's only my third signature I've made. ^_^ I'll read some tutorials tonight and see if I improve.
     
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    The pink flower on the left of curby kinda makes it wierd soft brush it out... other than that looks great 8/10
     
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    Looks great, can't think of anything to make it better off the top of my head.

    But then again, I don't know a lot about that style of sig. >_<
     
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    I believe there are too many colors, i like the render as it is clear and looks good, would be interesting to see your next.
     
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    Okay, I'll try to keep the next one more basic with colours then.
     
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    the fonts nice, the render kinda suites the pic, its just the focal point and i dnt get why the side of the kirby is blurred when the brush next to it isnt, but yh it looks fkin awesome for third sig, i sucked up to my ... still do =/
     
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    this is only your third sig i believe i made 9 and your better lol but seriously i like it but it's to many colors for me maybe tone it down a bit b&#31200;ut other then that it works well Im taking note of now people place there text and what font they using you mind telling what you used?
     
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    I love it, maybe if colours were less bright i'd like more
     
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    Well, I tried to blur the edges of kirby for a cleaner look, but I didn't think to blur the brush next to it.

    Thanks though!
     
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    In my opinion the darker colors (such as the purple and dark red) don't really look nice. It should have lighter colors, as Kirby really isn't dark, and is more tropical (IDK that's how I'd describe it). Other than that it's pretty descent.

    EDIT: Noticed that the shading was rather odd too.
     
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    Basic + Small = GFX sex and LOTS of it

    Also, I just recently learned this. And I'm not saying anything about your sig, it's just something to keep in mind

    No Text > Bad Text
     
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    haha i like it! its pretty fun
     
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