My Rap Lyrics (NEW)

STRESS​

I drink this bottle up so bottoms up, cuz Im stressin
So fire it up
Cuz my anger is bottled up like a message
My mind erupts like erections
When times are rough just a second applies the snowball effect to my aggression - Got us stuck
But most the time I waste my time getting wasted
Taking my time as a wasted talent realizing I made it already
I tasted hate and I hate it
And felt the pain that it came with
From holdin grudges to try to replace the pride and erase that Im hardheaded
Im sharp like the razorblades that its shaved with
Fuck it, just save it
Lets make it a problem dawg its goin down baby, down
Permanent scars from these wars, I scribble raps
So the pain fades like henna tats
I bring it back
Maintain remaining a step above like the pavement
My heart is racing - tryin to live righteous and ancient
I tried it but days changin
Seeing Satan blowing kisses at me
Tried to resist it but its tempting so I let him have me.no!

 

Fair goood .

You wrote this ?

 

Wow. Coming out from a sythe member, you are a good lyricist. Hope to see more of your rap songs.

 

Thanks bro and ya I write my own raps I have another thread about this but w/e ya Im gonna make a rap song soon

 

uuhh these seem like a diffrent type of Rap, not real rap ill find out and post again

NICE 7/10

 

Good stuff. You've got a good sense for lyricism. This is some "open mic" stuff, which I think is mad nice. It's good to know that you also see every word does not have to rhyme exactly. Not bad at all. To me, this is way better than talking about shit like "my gat, blast you, bitches, etc."

How is this not "real" rap? Is it because he doesn't talk about money, hoes, bling, or some crank dat shit?

 

Ya this aint no soulja boy crap, or like 50 cent shit.

 

Who are you trying to sound like?, tbh your quite good with your lyrics just not in a rap sense maybe a different genre if you get what i mean?

 

its better then most rap gj

 

It sort of lacks real meanings and grammar,flow is ok,but overall descent.

 

eh thanks

 

not to bad got a pretty nice flow to it.

 

grammar doesnt matter while rappin unless u can rly spit it. xix maybe sometime we can put a rap togeather or sum shit

 

And for that I thank you man.

But honestly, Hip-Hop is dieing. A lot of up and coming artist are being Soulja Boy. ( As in shitty lyrics.) But we have to face the fact that Hip-Hop is going to that direction. ( It's all about the dance not that lyrics stuff.) That's why I'm starting to some Soulja Boy stuff. D:

 

haha i like the erection part rofl

nice tho 7/10

 

lol thanks its rappers like Soulja Boy and those boy groups that fuck up rap.

 

I think you meant hip hop,because Rap is different than hip hop in several ways.

 

dude nice lyrics

 

i liked it made me think like the "bottled up like a message" parT

I produce songs and make some nice beats ( dont think im a big time producer but if you want send me some songs u made w/o beats ill put on a hot beat and see how it gose up ) check out this one i made on my myspace its in ingish some parts in spanish www.myspace.com/platino28

 

Thanks