The Kings of all Kings User Education Application *guide ripping*

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My UE Application

APPLICATION COMPLETION:UPDATING GUIDES WILL PM SOMEONE ONCE MY GUIDES ARE COMPLETE

I __The Kings of all Kings_______ claim the guides I have written to be completely my own work and written by me using my own knowledge and I have not used any resources to create these guides. I accept that if my guides are found to be plagiarized I will be banned from Sythe.org"

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Hello, my name is Malachi and I'm 16 from Maryland. I would like to join the User Education Team, because I love to help others out with my knowledge on things. Most of the guides I have are mostly about school. Education is the key of life, that’s why I going to college. Because all I need to do is to stay in school for 8 more years then start my career which is going to be 30 years of my life. That’s why I starting off young, I don’t want to be one of those old adults that have no life. Choose me as a User Education.


My Guides
1.http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=442791 How To get out of school early
2.http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=444430 How to lose weight
3.http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=443729 How to fight against bullys
4.http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=444539 How to be smart in school
5.http://sythe.org/showthread.php?t=444582 How to take care of your dog

 

Hey there, here is my input on your guides;

Guide 1​

This guide was OK. You went in depth a bit on your tactics for getting out of school, although I thought you could have used a bit more detail. Some things you didn't add was, a title, section(s), and an index. Adding these to your guide, can give the readers a bit better of an understanding, and overall makes your guides look better. Not a bad guide though, 6/10.

Guide 2​

Once again, the guide was OK. You did not go in depth enough with the subject, and you definitely could've had more detail. Also try looking to see if your guide has already been made before, because I cannot stand it when people make guides that have already been made before. The pictures to me served of no purpose to your guide. Some things you didn't add was, a title, section(s), and an index. Adding these to your guide, can give the readers a bit better of an understanding, and overall makes your guides look better. Overall a mediocre guide. 5/10.

Guide 3​

This guide was horrible. Not only did you not go into any detail whatsoever, this guide is completely in correct, and stupid. If you do this cheap crap to a bully, they will just kill you when they get up. The pictures to me made no sense, a little disturbing as well. Some things you didn't add was, a title, section(s), and an index. Adding these to your guide, can give the readers a bit better of an understanding, and overall makes your guides look better. Next time you write a guide like this, please make sure you know what your talking about. 3/10.

Guide 4​

Basically this guide is just incorrect. Although this might work for elementary teachers, this will never work in Middle School and Up. You did not go into enough detail, you basically just little things. Try going into more depth and detail when writing a guide like this. Some things you didn't add was, a title, section(s), and an index. Adding these to your guide, can give the readers a bit better of an understanding, and overall makes your guides look better. Overall, a guide that needs much improvement. 2/10.

Guide 5 ​

Extremely sad, not only have I seen this guide WAY too many times. You ripped it. http://www.hsus.org/pets/pet_care/dog_care/caring_for_your_dog_the_top_ten_essentials.html , You ripped it, changed a few words around. 0/10.

Sorry but, your guides are all mediocre, my vote is No

Although here are some things to improve on:

When you are writing a guide, write it as though the person you are writing it to has no idea whatsoever on the subject, also include an introduction on what the topic is incase someone does not know. This way, it gives the guide reader a more enlightened and detailed experience while reading your guide. There's no point in just writing a guide for the sake of it, it benefits no-one and is a waste of forum space. Also, Please do not rip guides. Sythe members will always catch it. Just be yourself and write your guides originally.

The best of luck,

-Darklord12345

 

A guide was ripped.