Second attempt

Well I took another look at Decisive's tut and decided to make another sig using the same style. This time NO BLACK BARS! And I know the text may not be perfect but I'm working on it.



Here's original render:

 

Text is better positioned than last time, still needs some work to get it to blend in, though. Also, it looks like a smudge and a filter. Try to add in some more effects next time and make the background a little more than just plain. You might want to try overlapping the render a little, but not to much.

 

Alright, thanks Bbri. I guess the other layers are less visible and I will have to work on that.

 

Try to blend it in and make the background cooler
Otherwise it's a 7/10 from me

 

Tip try to blend the render in and erase parts of it with a little soft brush

 

It does look nice, although I'm not really a fan of all the black space - I don't know, just looks odd to me.

 

Yeah I was actually thinking about adding some c4d's in it if I use the same tut again. I defiantly like the look that this tut creates, and thank you guys for telling me what needs to be fixed or changed!

 

Alot better then last time, great stuff, it seams you excelled in the tutorial.


Good Job